Slam (brother) Poetry

September 25, 2009

Brothers;

Their love comes from where the wild things are.

Crashing and bashing its way out of the woods

towards curl-tugging, nose-grabbing,

chasing, embracing,

growling kisses.

Brothers 1

Dancing the bedtime blues

they sway and pray

for more time

free of the confines of 4 posters and a set of sheets.

When granted a reprieve

it’s wrenchingly beautiful

to see them pause between bouts of bedlam

and hug the guts out of each other.

Brothers 2

Sheer celebration and wrangling

one another

is what they do best

be it on the floor, bed, driveway or lawn.

Brothers 3

We are never bored.

There’s too much to explore, crush, challenge and duel

too much energy

pure rocket fuel

brother love, that is.

Brothers 5

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{ 9 comments… read them below or add one }

1 Lindsey September 25, 2009 at 15:12

I like this one better because I can really see you reciting this, decked out in black… with a beret. *snap snap snap*

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2 thegypsymama September 25, 2009 at 16:16

I have never owned a beret in my life.

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3 Tony York September 29, 2009 at 09:50

Very cool. I have 3 brothers (no sisters) … I can see us in your words.

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4 thegypsymama September 29, 2009 at 10:56

Thanks – there certainly is a wild and untamed energy about boys. Your mom must have some tall tales to tell after surviving 4!

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5 Tony York September 29, 2009 at 10:59

Oh.. I am sure she does. There is only 4 and half years difference from the oldest to the youngest. My guess is that her blindness kept her from having a heart attack because if she could have seen half the things we got into, there is no doubt her heart would have given out.

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6 Tony York September 29, 2009 at 11:02

By the way.. I had a friend that I worked with who was from South Africa. Do you know what a Parktown Prawn is?

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7 thegypsymama September 29, 2009 at 19:47

Ha! Parktown prawns – the biggest, juiciest cockroaches known to man!

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8 Mari Mayborn October 5, 2009 at 13:16

I love this way of seeing brother-love. I have 8 great nephews—they rough and tumble and love it…and love each other with all they have. A lot of people want to tame this right out of boys. Thanks for delighting in it and letting it dance and tumble through your words. ‘Enjoyed it very much!

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9 thegypsymama October 5, 2009 at 13:25

Thanks so much! I think there is a good reason that “Where the Wild Things Are” resonates so powerfully with boys – because each of them has a little wild man in their souls that needs to strutt and yell and slay monsters as much as it needs to be polite. Finding the balance is the tricky part; but somedays it works out just right when they rush into the kitchen with swords and helmets at the ready and then politely asd, “you need to be rescued, mama?”

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